题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者词汇表达比较多样,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
Today computer is more and more popular in our daily life.We can use computers to do a lot of things,for example,doing home work,playing games and so on.It is convience to use computer ,it can save our time. So some people think that computer is much useful than our brains.Because computer can run much quicker than man'brains.So we can do everything with computer. But I think computer is limited,because it is just doing the things that our human told it.It doesn't have it's own mind.On the other hand,it is a machine under the contrl of man.Without man,it can't do anything.So man is much powerful than computer,we should improve our ability to update computer's function.So computer can do our favour,we will benefit from it.