2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As we all know, a person who have a strong will may success in future more earlier. What's more, it is a improtant ganrantee to success. There are so many examples to explian it. Without a strong will, the people would have been defected. In our study, our work even our life all have a large number hardships, even if, we also shouldn't be defected for these frustrations. So we all have a common view in this matter. only had a strong will, can we complete the grand committion. Studens also. Who can't be a geniune without study hard.