高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；请注意分段。

My Hometown my hometown is a beautiful place,but many years later,the person's life did not as well as before.my grandfather told me that hometown's trees were very green,the river is clear and the fish swam in the river free.The farmer was kind hearted and friendly,people's living conditions were poor. But now,there are many buldings and shops,more and more cars in the street,factory produced dirty things,it is made air pollution become more and more serious,trees became smalller,now we no longer see the fish swam in the river.It is our duty to protect environment.