文章衔接手法恰当;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多。
My Hometown My hometown is a beautiful place,but many years later,the person's life did not as well as before.my grandfather told me that hometown's trees were very green,the river is clear and the fish swam in the river free.The farmer was kind hearted and friendly,people's living conditions were poor. But now,there are many buildings and shops,more and more cars in the street,factory produced dirty things,it is made air pollution become more and more serious,trees became smaller. Now we no longer see the fish swam in the river.It is our duty to protect our environment.