从句使用不错,但需加强复杂句的使用;文中拼写错误比较多,同时请注意积累词汇量;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;连词使用偏少。
Today,many students aren't attention to spelling for study English.people think that only learn talking is ok,why so many people think so? we have computer can do anything in our left.wo study use computer,we work use computer,and we writing use computer,noone is attention to spelling. inorder to change it,I think wo shuold make students learn spelling on consider