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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:教育 Education

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The table below gives information about the numbers of international students from four areas of the world who came to study at university level in a western country in 2000 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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The table describes the number of international student who came from different four areas of the world went to study at university in a western country in 2000 and 2005.According the data,the number of total reduce 8000 people.There was observly decrease from 35,000 to 22,000 in China,although it was the largest group.And there was 4 times increase from 2000 to 2005 in Brazil. In these four countries,the number of china was two times larger than India in 2000.The number of China decrease from 35,000 to 22,000.The number of Japan was three times than Brazil in 2000,but during five years,Brazil was increase four times,and Japan was decrease 2,000.The number of Brazil was two times larger than Japan.

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