作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;作者词汇量较小,单词拼写也要注意。
In recent years,people are becoming decreasingly aware of learning chinese.So,I think,we should pay attention to the study of chinese. The reason one of ingnorance chinese language's study is that people are becoming increascingly aware of other language's study.For example English,Japanese and so on.Another reason is that students are less and less intrested in Chinese.They think it is boring. The result of ingnorancing Chinese is variesty.First one,the less learning Chinese,the less konwlege of chinese will be.Second one,if we don't take it important,maybe one day we will lose our traditional culture. I think duo attention should be give to the study of Chinese.Only in this way,could we take our traditional culture one by one.