2000年1月英语四级作文真题:解决上大学的费用

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there are a lots of ways to finance my college education. on the one hand, i could ask for my parents, it they have enough money to pay it. on the other hand, i do not need the helpful from my parents and do it in myself. in this way, i need to work hard in academic work and try my best to get the premium. sometimes, i will find some parttime jobs in the free time. therefore, it is not usually join the activity of my favorite association. of course, i also apply the poor student to the college. as far as i am concerned, my family is not rich than other. i consider that it is suitable for me that taking some parttime jobs. because taking some parttime jobs could meet the various kinds of people and improve my other skills.