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作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，学术词汇使用过少；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；能够使用一些不错的从句。
In recent years, dishonest has more and more existed in our social. Also everyone in order to get success to use dishonest in everywhere. If it always become a bad fashion, i believe our social will dead. Many different reasons contribute to dishonest has more and more existed in our social. Among them, if some guys want to get them how to get, they will tell the false and dishonest to everyone. Moreover, many persons in order to make them forget the mistakes and they will be dishonest to them. Besides, if someone wanna who he or she cares , he or she will tell the good lies to them,but tell the lies is not a good action. Finally, we know dishonest has more and more existed in our life. As for me, i think we should be honest in our life no matter what we do or what we don't. Because honest not only good for us, but also good for other persons. If we shouldn't be honest to our life, we will pay something what we lose. I hope we should be honest in our life and it will help everyone let the dishonest less and less existed in our social.
