小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中很少出现过渡词和衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

My father is very busy. Every day he goes to work by subway. He teaches math at school, His math is very good! In the afternoon, he eats lunch at school. After lunch, he reads newspapers. Then he goes home at 5:30. He eats dinner. Then, he takes a bath in the evening. He watches TV at living room. After watching TV, he goes to bed at 10:00. My father works hard. I like my father very much!