2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句式变化多样；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。

As is known of us,nobody could succeeds without a strong will,it's essential that have a strong will,this quality can help person get a good result in many place,in generally,strong will is the most important guarantee to succeed. If someone tell you taht a people don't have a strong will,however,he is a sucessful man,can you believe that,you must say "oh,that is reticular".A strong will would accomplish great things. Not only ordinary people need a strong will,but also student need it necessary.There is no doubt that study is a so long road that every student must have a strong will,to be exact,is a eager to be a successful man,if not,you wouldn't become a useful person.