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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3007
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

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The Way to Success Everyone wants to be successful ,and not everyone becom successful . There are many reasons for their failure ,but one reason maybe the most important one is that they don't prepare fully before they began to achieve one work . Abranhanm Lincoln had a famous remark ,"Give me six hours to chop a tree , and I will spend the first four sharpening the axe " . And ,in China's old words also there is a similar one that "Sharpening the axe will not delay chopping down trees ." From above ,we can follow that before we get ready to do one thing ,we should first do some prepare ing for it .But in fact we usually begin our work without any preparing .In this way ,we could offen see the situation that onebody stands just after his sitting ,for he needing a tool to furnishing his work . If he could have got all tools at his handside he will finish his work with fewer hours . We should learn from Lincoln's remark ,and prepare fully before beginning our behevors.

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