词汇表达不够丰富,要增加学术词汇的使用;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
In recent years,people are becoming decreasingly aware of learning chinese.So,I think,we should pay attention to the study of chinese. The reason one of ignorance chinese language's study is that people are becoming increasingly aware of other language's study.For example English,Japanese and so on.Another reason is that students are less and less interested in Chinese.They think it is boring. The result of ignorance Chinese is variety.First one,the less learning Chinese,the less konwlege of chinese will be.Second one,if we don't take it important,maybe one day we will lose our traditional culture. I think duo attention should be give to the study of Chinese.Only in this way,could we take our traditional culture one by one.