Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构不严谨。
From the table,we can see that a boy has a higher educational background,he lower employs rate and earning much money. In today's society, academic certificate is important to chinese. person looking for work, a book first see to your academic. If you graduated to a good collage. you will get a good treatment.,but you will not get a good treatment. Even though you will get out. Competion is more and more intense in today. A people of the higher education, he was to the best win.In conclusion,we have to graduate in the college.we will have the chance to show us.