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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第50篇:是否该活到老学到老

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:00浏览次数:3526[网页划词已开启]
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One should not give up on getting a degree just because she is a little older.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

是否该活到老学到老。只是因为自己老了,就可以放弃学业吗?你怎么看?给我具体原因并举出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分90.5分
评语:

文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;作者在句法层面做的很棒;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

I totally agree with the statement that learning is a lifelong process, and the importance of learning cannot be overstated. Firstly, we are living in an era of knowledge explosion and the speed of updating of knowledge soars like a rocket. When you are proud of the knowledge you have learned, you might be outdated due to the ever-increasingly new knowledge. This point can be illustrated with the example of mine. I am striving for getting my doctor degree of biochemistry, if I have gotten the degree and I was satisfied with the achievements which lead me to give up learning, what will happen? I will know nothing about the progress of the related field, the cutting-edge technology that can be used in a crucial experiment and so on. Which in turn makes you cannot keep the pace of the time. Secondly, lasting learning gives you a competitive edge in this age of globalization. Learning the knowledge related to your field is helpful to make you as an expert in this field, you can also acquire a high-paying job. For learning the unrelated field, such as learning English, still can benefit you. The extensive use of English as a global language has substantially prompted the development of a lot of international organizations, enhanced the cross-culture communication, which can raise your cultural awareness. Thirdly, not only the individuals, but also the whole country will benefit from the citizens’ lifelong learning. Xiaoping Deng said that science and technology are the primary productive forces. Only by constitute learning can we keep pace with the development of science and technology of the world, then augmenting the productivity of our countries, which is of significance for a nation to stand among worldly nationalities.

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