题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;全文结构较为严谨。
More and more people are becoming nervous when it comes to computers.The topic of man and computer has also became a hot theme which we always discussed about,but the views are divide from person to person. From the the people which do his favor to the computer ,what they claimed is that computer is one of the most useful tool in the modern world and It are playing a very important role in many filed,such as business and economy .however,there are a lot of people think that its disadvantages are more heavier than advantages.They hold that with the computer games are more and more popular at the moment,the majority of teenage are addicted to it in order to they has wasted many time to study. From my point of view ,i think we all should be clam when we treat with this problem.We should make the most used of the computer and don't be its slavery.