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文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；从句比例偏少，简单句稍微偏多了；作者能较丰富地使用学术词汇，但词汇量不大，且存在拼写错误。
On shopping has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life, it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, Online Shopping could have saved time. And secondly, it has increased selectively for our. Just as a popoular saying goes" every coin has two sides",Online Shopping is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, it can not ensure the quality of the goods. In addition to, whether products fited self as dress size. To sum up, i think that we should try to bring the advantages of Online Shopping into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimun at the same time.
