2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；连词使用偏少。

Education Pays Education pays have became a important part in usual expense.According to the form,it is not difficult to find that education pays affect the employment rate. The people get the Doctoral degree,they median weekly get 1551 dollars and their unemployment rate is 2.5%.The people of the professional degree,their unemployment rate is 2.4%.They get 1665 dollars median weekly.The people of Master's degree earn money less than the Professional degree,they median weekly get 1263 dollars.And their unemployment rate is 3.6%.Their unemployment rate is 4.9% of the Bachelor's degree.They median weekly get 1053 dollars.The Associate degree's unemployment rate is 6.8% higher than Bachelor's degree.They median weekly get 768 dollars.And the some college,no degree,high school diploma,less than high school diploma median weekly get less money.And their unemployment rate continue to increase. So the education pays affect the unemployment.