2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Strong will is important to us.Strong will is the guarantee of the succeeds.In our study life,strong will is a good quality and benifit our sutdy.If you don't study hard,you will not become a useful person.I think that people has strong will who every morning do exercise reading and running.I am admiring to them and study from them.Only strong will can finish the great mission.