2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

作者词汇量偏少，但单词拼写做的不错；若增加一些长难句的使用，文章会更好；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

Strong will is important to us.Strong will is the pledge of the succeeds.In our study life,strong will is a good quality and benefit our study.If you don't study hard,you will not become a useful person.I think that people has strong will who every morning do exercise reading and running.I am admiring to them and study from them.Only strong will can finish the great mission.