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先从正反两方面说明师生关系在学校生活中的重要性：良好的关系可使学习有趣，教学开心；反之，学习无聊，教学没趣；而要想师生关系良好，相互理解和尊重很重要；老师既不能太严和太松；学生则应理解老师的苦衷，并虚心向老师学习；总之，良好的师生关系会使学生、老师双双受益。
permissive许可的，准许的；宽容的
单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
The door closed, and he knew she was back. She always returned home from work late. “Have you seen the evening paper yet, honey?” she asked in a deathly tired note. “Yeah!” he responded absently without looking up, his back still toward her. “Really?”she repeated again, cold and impassive. “You are so annoying! Leave me alone!”he said with a frown。As the deadline approached, his attention was absolutely absorbed by the screen. However, he didn’t know why he was so irritable that his unfriendly words let his wife walk out of room, her eyes in tears. In a short while, he accomplished all the works and relaxed himself with the evening paper. A bus accident news came into his view:the bus crashed killing all 21 passengers aboard. And he immediately recognized his wife’s face as soon as he glanced briefly towards the list of the dead. He stand up with shock, looked around each conner of the home, and found no one around.
