2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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hello , you know ,computer is every important to us .We can use it to do anything wo love to,such as play game ,watch movies and so on.As devolement of scioty ,computer also make a great . and i think may be someday it can do anything as humans.and i think may be someday it can do anything as humans.and i think may be someday it can do anything as humans.