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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。
The Dragon Boat Festival The Dragon Boat Festival is one of important national festival in China, and it is set in order to ceremony QuYuan which is great poet in Chinese history. People who live on every place in China will celebrate this festival in 5th.May every year. However, most of the young people pay little attention the national festival, including The Dragon Boat Festival. They like more foreigner festival. In my viewpoint, we should pay more attention to our national festivals. Firstly, traditional festivals include various Chinese culture. We can learn about more conventional custom and culture through celebrating them. During this process, we not only receive happiness, but also trumpet our national culture. Secondly, celebrating conventional festivals also inspire a sense of our ethic praise. We pay more attention to our traditional custom and know more knowledge. Meanwhile, we also can realize some people which have great achievement in Chinese history. And then, we will proud of our nation and country. Thirdly, celebrating traditional festival has good influence to other people which is not interested in our conventional culture. Nowadays, the young people learn few traditional Chinese culture, we should pay more attention to our national festivals than other western festival.
