2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用。

computer and man As we all know,compter is worldwide in temporary,almost everyone own one.But problems follow,how can we use the product of technology proper without doing harms such as teenagers'addictiion to computer games.such a problem triggers some discussions among people. As far as i'm concerned,computers are the things made by our human beings,we have the power to take control of it.In other words ,if we human beings come to be mastered by computer,that would be a shame.so no matter how interest you are in those things like games,movies and so on,you need to get rid of it as soon as possible.Moreover,the aims we invent computers are to serve for our working and release our pressure from the job .Thus,it is beneficial for us to learn in the internet as well as gain more and more resources as possible as we can. All in all,it's vital for us taking good use of computers but care that they are under our control.