2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；若注意一些语法错误，文章会更漂亮。

As we all know,compter is worldwide temporary,almost everyone own one.But problems follow,how can we use the product of technology proper without doing harm such as teenagers'addictiion to computer games.Such a problem triggers some discussion among lots of people. As far as I'm concerned,computers are the things made by our human beings,we have the power to take control of it.In other words,if we human beings turn to be mastered by computer,that would be a shame.So no matter how interest you are in those things like games,movies and so on,you need to get rid of it as soon as possible.Moreover,the aim we invent computers is to serve for our work and release our pressure from the job .Thus,it is beneficial for us to learn in the internet as well as gain more and more resources as possible as we can. All in all,it is vital for us making good use of computers but care that they are under our control.