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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17425
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;作者句法知识较为扎实,可增加复合句和从句使用。

用户练习作文:

As we all know,computer is worldwide today,almost everyone owns one.But problems follow,how can we use the product of technology proper without doing harm such as teenagers'addictiion to computer games.Such a problem triggers some discussion among lots of people. As far as I'm concerned,computers are the things made by our human beings,we have the power to take control of it.In other words,if we human beings are gradually to be mastered by computer,that would be a shame.So no matter how interest you are in those things like games,movies and so on,you need to get rid of it as soon as possible.Moreover,the aim that we invent computers is to offer help to our work and release our pressure from the job.Thus,it is beneficial for us to learn in the internet as well as gain more and more resources as possible as we can. All in all,it is vital for us making good use of computers but care that they are under our control.

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