2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；可适当增加几条从句；作者词汇基础扎实，注意文中极个别的拼写错误。

As we all know,computer is worldwide today,almost everyone owns one.But problems follow,how can we utilize the product of technique properly without creating any side effects such as teenagers'addictiion to computer games.Such a problem triggers some discussion among lots of people. As far as I'm concerned,computers are the substances manufactured by our human beings,we possess the power to take control of it.In other words,if we human beings are addicted to the prodct without awareness,that would be a great shame.So no matter how interest you are in those things like games,movies and so on,you need to get rid of it as soon as possible.Moreover,the aim that we invent computers is to offer help to our work and release our pressure from the job.Thus,it is beneficial for us to learn in the internet as well as gain more and more resources as possible as we can to resolve something difflcult matters. All in all,it is vital for us making good use of computers but just pay attention that they are under our control.