2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；可适当增加从句的使用；上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

My views on online shopping Nowadays,shopping online is more and more popular with people. Online shopping has many advantages.For example,it can save time,because people can buy things at home through the online.And it also very comfortable for people.People can buy everything they like online.However,every coins has both sides.online shopping still cause some problems.such as bad things. In my view,I suggest that we can choose online shopping in right way.