Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。
From the chart, we clearly learn that education pays is higher and low unemployment rates. However, we also understand that education pays is lower and high unemployment rates. Education pays is higher and low unemployment rates has brought great influence on our low lever graduates.Firstly, as education pays is low students, they might face to unemployment when they graduated. Secondly, the same also to education pays is low students, they will choose to update their education, because they understand the higher diploma can promise them to get a good job. Thirdly, Education pays is higher students will become the popular in the society. As for me, I think Education pays is higher or lower students will be gain the huge different money when they got the job. Also, this situation will become the worst result that the education pays is higher person become more and more rich, as well as the education pays is lower person become more and more poor. So it is not good for our society and our everyone graduates.