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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46218
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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From the chart, we clearly learn that education pays is higher and low unemployment rates. However, we also understand that education pays is lower and high unemployment rates. Education pays is higher and low unemployment rates has brought great influence on our low lever graduates.Firstly, as education pays is low students, they might face to unemployment when they graduated. Secondly, the same also to education pays is low students, they will choose to update their education, because they understand the higher diploma can promise them to get a good job. Thirdly, Education pays is higher students will become the popular in the society. As for me, I think Education pays is higher or lower students will be gain the huge different money when they got the job. Also, this situation will become the worst result that the education pays is higher person become more and more rich, as well as the education pays is lower person become more and more poor. So it is not good for our society and our everyone graduates.

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