2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man With the development of the social ecnomy and teconology, the impromance of the computer becomes more and more obviously. there is on doubt that the computer can help us do majority things and we can not leave it any more. some think that the computer has been abused. there are many people who are addicted in the computer.they stop going shopping in the retil shop and markats,even not go downstairs to buy the supplies.all of these things can be done on the interent.bisides,the number of computer games players are increasing,esecpilly in the students.so it is necessary that we limit the usage of the computer. however,some hold that the computer is a good tool which we can use to improve the work rate.noone can denys the teconology products have on harm, but we should measure the proportion of the advantage. he computer, in fact,is taking a vtial part in our lives..the computer is not just a kind of machine, it is our friend who will offer us the unlimited benifit. in my view, the computer, shoud be use as wildely as possible.