2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法知识掌握的错误，可适当增加从句的使用；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下。

Devoloping with the society,people want survive so that become more and more dishonesty,to increasing income,at present,there is a phenomenon that many goods are excessively packaging by some businessman. In my opinion,this is wrong artical trade for consumers,a lot of bad effection are caused because the phenomenon,I think everyone should be honest man. So we can strengthen inspections and write something suggest businessman don't do this,only in this way can we make our society become well.