2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；有效的运用了一些复杂句。

At present,a lot of good have the phenomenon that on excessive packaging in the community,so grand packing that make customer confused and puzzled that how to select a useful goods, a goods they really need. They have many reasons caused to this phenonmenon happen,the most important reason is the values of people had lost,focus on their sight of profit just now. Personally speaking,firstly, we should refused this goods firmly,meanwhile,select some goods that we really need,don't be confused .Deeds are better than words ,use you action to resist it.Secondly,i suggest department take some measures to forbid it, avoid waste of resources.If we can do the above two points,this phenomenon will disappear sooner or later.