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Creating a Green Campus As we can see that nowadays the surroundings around us was so dirty and so unclearn.How this will hurt our bodies?It's so unheathy for us.Apart from the socirty,it's happened to our campus. From my point of view,i suppose that it's important for us to creat a green campus,which is good for our health and the study. And we know that the green campus it doesn't just mean the green environment,it also means that there is a good study atmosphere around the campus.Except,a civilized campus is important for us as well.If we haven't a good study atmosphere,we won't have a good heart to learn our subjects. So in order to creat a green campus ,we ought to do our best to clean our campus and our classroom.And when you see dirty rubbish,please pick them up and throw them into the boxes.In addition,don't speak some uncivilized words,it's very rude to the campus.We should help each other in our campus ,helping others with homework or other things.It's good for us to make friends and keep the environment clean. Let's fighting!let's creat a green campus for ourselves.