2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；请注意分段。

In recent years, there are a lot of people died of earthquake and so many people lost their family, natural disasters are not unavoidable. Although it is terrible, when it comes, we shouldn’t fear and we should calm down learn how to save ourselves. At the same time, we should try our best to protect our earth, because of the earth is our homeland, we have responsibility to let our home become more better in the future.