2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒；作者能较灵活的使用词汇，可是单词拼写还需加强。

In the big news time,losts of peopel choose to work,play,make freinds,get informations from computer.Of course,there are some talks about it. On the hand,some peopel think it is conveinent to us to do everything on the computer,for example we can get the recent news in hte first time,we csn keep in touch with our freinds quikly when we each other having something,we can play games with the net freinds and so on.In a word,it is benifit for our life. On the other hand,there are amounts of peopel believe that peopel stay with computer for more time is bad for our nomal life.These cases to think,one of this is lots of students play computer all day so that their study has dowm day by day,in the end they have to drop out of the school,some adlts want to find freinds on the net