2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句采用很棒；作者能词汇表达较准确熟练，但请仔细检查词汇的拼写。

In these days,losts of people choose to work,play,make freinds,get informations from computer.Of course,there are some talks about it. On the hand,some people think it is conveinent to us to do everything on the computer,for example we can get the recent news in the first time,we csn keep in touch with our friends quikly when we each other having something,we can play games with the net friends and so on.In a word,it is benefit for our life. On the other hand,there are amounts of peopel believe it is bad for our normal life when peopie stay with computer for more time..These cases to think,one of this is lots of students play computer all day so that their study has dowm day by day,in the end they have to drop out of the school,some people surff the internet rather than play sports out door,their body was broken down. As far as i am concerd,i advise we should play computer in sa eligible time,in the same time,we are also do some excersise to keep our health.