2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中词汇表达较为丰富准确，但存在单词拼写错误。

In these days,losts of people choose to work,play,make freinds,get informations from computer.Of course,there are some talks about it. On the hand,some people think it is convenient to us to do everything on the computer,for example we can get the recent news in the first time,we can keep in touch with our friends quikly when we having something,we can play games with the net friends and so on.In a word,it is a benefit for our life. On the other hand,there are amounts of peopel believe it is bad for our life what is staying with computer for more time.These cases to think,one of this is lots of students play computer all day so that their study has dowm day by day,in the end they have to drop out of the school,some people surff the internet rather than play sports out door,their body was broken down. As far as i am concert,i advise we should play computer in sa eligible time,in the same time,we are also do some excersise to keep our health.