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It is very important for our lifetime that a strong will,we need it whatever we do.Nothing succeeds without it,students also is such, don't study hard, it won't be useful workers. For example,if you want study English well,you might need a strong will,relatively,it is imposible that study English well,you should begin to words,then wtitting some simple sentence until you can write difficult article and wherever and whenever you can speak English quickly.From begin to finish,you could requir one mouth or one year even several years.So it couldn't secceed without a strong will. No matter what we do,we must have a strong will,only in this way can we finish great mission.