2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视。

It is very important for our lifetime that a strong will,whatever we do ,we need it .Nothing succeeds without it,students also is such, don't study hard, it won't be useful workers. For example,if you want study English well,you might need a strong will,relatively,it is impossible that study English well,you should begin to words,then writting some simple sentences until you can write difficult article and wherever and whenever you can speak English quickly.From begining to finishing.You could require one mouth or one year even several years.So it couldn't succeed without a strong will. No matter what we do,we have to have a strong will,only in this way can we finish great mission.