2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。

waste have become an increasingly severce performance in our campus ,creating bad hobbies among college students.It is very not good for our development and our nation when we are jump into society . waste cause a lot of harmful results. firstly ,waste will spend a lot of resouces ineffective and productive while some poverty people dont have enough resouces such as food ,water and enegety .secondly ,waste make people lazy to contibute a great deal to work ,leading to lack of energetic and goal .thirdly , if waste spread with all our nation,it must impede our national development. we should adopt some manners to improve this badly phenomenons.