2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；用词丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大提升的空间；请注意分段。

At present,a lot of good have the phenomenon that on excessive packaging in the community,so grand packing that make customer confused and puzzled that how to choosea useful items, a goods they really need. They have many reasons caused to this phenonmenon happen,the most important reason is the values of people had lost,focus on their sight of profit just now. Personally speaking,firstly, we should refused this goods firmly,meanwhile,select some goods that we really need,don't be confused .Deeds are better than words,use you action to resist it.Secondly,i suggest department take some measures to forbid it, avoid waste of resources.If we can do the above two points,this phenomenon will disappear sooner or later.