句式变化较为明显,句法基础不错;文章层次较为清晰;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
In recent years,the phenomeon that many students pay little attention to study Chinese becoming serious.Chinese as one of our traditional culture is various and absorbing.Why did this happened? There are three main causes for it.first,as the English become the global language,many students pay much more attention to it and there's no time to learn Chinese.Second,the government set diffent English test in various examination for the students which want to get their dreams come ture.Last but not least,we lived in the surrounding that all speaking Chinese,this makes us think our Chinese is good and there is no necessery to learn it.The result of this will makes ue lose our culture and lose ourselves. In order to change this phenomenon,I thought we should try our best to make students know the importance of learning Chinese,and the government should do someghing to help the kid learn Chinese well.