2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

with the developement of high technology,there are more and more people study or work with a computer.it is so convenient!we an even get everything we want.on the contrary,the computer bring us many bad things too! a computer can be used to watch movie or tv.and reading many news is also a good choice.except for these.nowadays,people would use it to chat with others rather than work.and we can also use it to go shopping.this is both convenient and cheap.a good computer skill can help us do a work better.there are various ways of cilizing computer.a computer changes everyone's living style. on the other hand,many people are easy to be addicted in computer games.they do nothing but playing computer games.people who use computer more 6 hours a day.it is easy to get a poor eyesight.and his or her spine is deeply hurt.so computer isn't always good for people. in my opinions,we should use computer in right ways.for instance,time should be seriously strict in using computer.and people in different age are allowed to use it in diferent ways.only a correct way of using computer can we live a better life!