2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

Talent show This picture discribes that some people' attitude onTalent show.They holds different views about it. Most people think its advantages over its disadvantages.There are several reasons for it.On the one hand it is essential to enrich people's extra activities for those who always stay at hoom.On the other hand,you will have a good chance to practice yourself.As the coin has two sides,some people have opponents.Attending the Talent show spend their too much time.They cannot do other things. In my view,Talent show can create a opportunity to those who wants to famous people.You should take good advantage of the chance.