2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

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With the rapid development of technology and economy, more and more people are willing to spend more times of finding a easy way to success . What i am wondering is that have it really a way to success easily ? Everyone want to be the person who they all looked up to since they are child,they spend more times and money to find the success road.someone hold the opinion that you can be successful if you are study hard and having a clever mind .However,the others claimed that to be success is not very difficult if have more money and more relationship in our society. From my point of view , the way to success are in our minds .As a popular saying goes"Confidence in yourself is the road to success".You will be appreciated it if you can be confidence.Only in this way,you can be more success in your later life.