2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；能够使用一些不错的从句；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；可以适当增加副词的使用。

With the rapid development of technology and economy, more and more people are willing to spend more times of finding an easy way to success . Everyone want to be the person who they all looked up to since they are child and they spend more times to find the success road.someone hold the opinion that you can be successful if you are study hard and having a clever mind .However,the others claimed that to be success is not very difficult if have more money and more relationship in our society. From my point of view , the way to success are in our minds .As a popular saying goes"Confidence in yourself is the road to success".You will be appreciated it if you can be confidence.Only in this way,you can be more success in your later life.