2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文章词汇表达要更加熟练，希望能更多使用一些学术词汇；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

With the rapid development of technology and economy, more and more people are willing to spend more times of finding an easy way to success . Someone hold the opinion that you can be successful if you are study hard and having a clever mind .However,the others claimed that to be success is not very difficult if have more money and more relationship in our society. From my point of view , the way to success are in our minds .As a popular saying goes"Confidence in yourself is the road to success".You will be appreciated it if you can be confidence.Only in this way,you can be more success in your later life.