2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

With the rapid development of technology and economy, more and more people are willing to spend more times of finding an easy way to success . Someone hold the opinion that you can be successful if you are study hard and having a clever mind .However,the others claimed that to be success is not very difficult if have more money and more relationship in our society. From my point of view , the way to success are in our minds.You will be appreciated it if you can be confidence.Only in this way,you can be more success in your later life.