文中用词稍显贫乏;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
In recent years,people are becoming decreasingly aware of learning chinese.So,I think,we should pay attention to the study of chinese. The reason one of ignorance chinese language's study is that people are becoming increasingly aware of other language's study.For example English,Japanese and so on.Another reason is that students are less and less interested in Chinese.They think it is boring. The result of ignorance Chinese is variety.The first one,the less learning Chinese,the less konwlege of chinese will be.The second one,if we don't take it important,maybe one day we will lose our traditional culture. I think pay attention should give to the study of Chinese.Only in this way,we could take our traditional culture one by one.