2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加学术词汇的使用；简单句稍微有点多，可适当增加从句使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。

With the rapid development of technology and economy, more and more people are willing to spend more times of finding an easy way to success . Someone hold the opinion that you can be successful if you are study hard and having a clever mind .However,the others claimed that to be success is not very difficult if have more money and more relationship in our society. From my point of view, the way to success are in our minds.You will be appreciated it if you can be confidence.Only in this way,you can be more successful in your later life.